Firstly the strengths of my short film are that the editing of the live, the sound effects used and the range of shots that I have used many type of text and the way the live stream looks real was good to the viewers because it seems real to the viewer and plus the storyline makes sense and was intriguing to the viewer.
Secondly the weaknesses there are scenes from the start where you can hear the sound of me stop recording and there are seems that jump to quick to the next scene plus there are some noises in the background that don't match or don't sound good in those scenes another weakness is that it was cringe so this means that the audience was out of the vibe of the short film.
Thirdly the improvements I need to do is cut the scenes at the start because you can hear me stop recording which I can change easily this I will not change because when I was editing the short film I did not hear this when I was editing the shot film, they said some of the sound tracks of the short film are too loud or need to be more loud I can easily change this for the short film but I haven't done this because I want it to have that effect because then it gives a differ concentration to the audience and lastly I should add more dramatic or more music this I haven't added because nothing is happening in person to her so I haven't added this music because it don't give live stream vibes.
